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Please tell me about my mistakes.
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x-Ongaku-x Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful detailing, particularly on the fur. Fantastic work
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sagethethird Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2011  Professional
Wonderful!
lighting is spectacular, and I just noticed something important.
in all your Works in progress I've seen the fore ground is always the most detailed. Try detailing the background first, an then working on the foreground so that you have no worries about finishing the background as it's already finished.
Think of it as two different planes, pictures, put them on separate layers and such if you are using digital, if not do a sketchy under-painting and flesh out the background leaving the foreground painted but unfinished, focusing on near objects last and far away objects first.
:)
Love your art so far!
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Sudak Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2011
The left side of the face still looks mis-proportioned to me.
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Fox-Vlad Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2011
You finally reached perfection. I am amazed!
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goodwolf Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Why do you amazed? Did you think that I'm can't do it?
I don't think so, it no so good how I want
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Fox-Vlad Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2011
Image is very beautiful, almost photo realistic. Improvement from older pictures is obvious. You take compliments pretty hard
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ItalianDragon Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your mistake ? You think that you do some when you in fact don't :meow:
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wolfgaze001 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2010
The head looks very good, but the forehead could probably be a little bit longer from the ears to the eyes. I'm not sure about the pose.
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goodwolf Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Please write more details
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Novawuff Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2010  Professional General Artist
i really love the softness in your textures... the eye is very lifelike, and despite it being a black and white character, you've incorporated many subtle colors :}
the errors in the face are almost all to do with a few lines being only slightly crooked... would you like a redline? that might be easier than me trying to describe each one..
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BOONJAGGA Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2010  Student General Artist
The angle of the muzzle/nose seems to be slightly off.

Otherwise, I think it's good.
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Raineve Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
The side of the face thats farthest away seems a little to small! Other than that I dont see naything wrong!
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KetrinDog Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2010
Wonderful fur style! :wow:
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DeadAnthro Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Very cool, I really like it! Nice work! :D
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Sudak Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2010
From what I can see I would say the left side of the head looks a little out of proportion, not much but just a little. It seems as if the left side is further away then it should be.
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goodwolf Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Yes, you are right
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alaa9jo Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2010
It's hard to see in details,it's so small :hmm:
but if you're talking about the head only then I will say that you did pretty good,but the nose pose is not...uhh I'm not sure at all,sorry I can't suggest,the drawing is small and can't zoom in to see more close :)

good luck in your drawing,it's seems fantastic so far :nod:
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GuineaPigDan Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2010   Filmographer
Did you draw the entire body, or just the head and neck? I was going to suggest maybe making the part of the neck beneath the chin thicker, but without seeing the whole pose I'm not entirely sure whether it looks right or not. The shading and the rendering of the fur are spot on though.
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goodwolf Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Okay, now I see this
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